Friday 23 March 2018

Ocean Poem

          Ocean Poem
Glistening sunset reflects
onto the bright blue ocean,
           Waves crashing down
in a particular motion,  
Children jumping in
with no worry to spare,
                    Gulls crying,
throughout the air,
Sun's going down,
There's no time to spare,
      beautiful colors are fading away,
                            But not for long,


                    They'll come back each day.

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2 comments:

  1. joseph23 March 2018 at 14:47

    Greetings Zoe,

    I am from Panmure Bridge School, I really like how you've drawn a beautiful sun set, Next time can you make an blurb in your blog post.

    Great Job and Great Poem!

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  2. Mele11 May 2018 at 14:37

    Greetings Zoe,
    This blog post from you sounds really interesting. When I read your ocean poem I imagined everything that is happening in your poem. I love the image of your sunset colouring. I also like the way you used some great adjectives to your poem.
    Great Work Zoe.

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