Friday 23 March 2018

Hermit Crab



Hiding in the sand as I pop up to find

Two big monster with a shell in their hand

I dig beneath the sand to hide

As they Pick me up I start  to fight

drop me as quick as a ball
I begin fall,
SMACK I am now a ball they take to school.  


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1 comment:

  1. joseph1 June 2018 at 13:55

    Hi Zoe, my name is Joseph,

    I am from Panmure Bridge School, your work is laid out perfectly and your photo looks great. I would highly recommend using exclamation marks, but at this level it is still highly advanced work, so keep up the great work.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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