Your place value D.L.O Is a very good piece of work that I really enjoyed you talking about. I find it was easier if someone is reading their work then me reading it.
In your first opening paragraph you have quite few sentences that don't make sense. The second sentence of your first paragraph says place value is and easy way to work out hard equation like 190 + 701. I would of write place value is an easy way to work out hard equations like 190 + 701. Also In your last sentence I would add a full stop after value. But other then that you say the sentences perfectly clear which makes it easy to understand what you're saying.
Other than the mistakes in the first paragraph this D.L.O is very good and easy to understand. When some people use screencastify they either mumble or get very shy and talk very. Your screencastify was nice and clear.
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ReplyDeleteYour place value D.L.O Is a very good piece of work that I really enjoyed you talking about. I find it was easier if someone is reading their work then me reading it.
In your first opening paragraph you have quite few sentences that don't make sense. The second sentence of your first paragraph says place value is and easy way to work out hard equation like 190 + 701. I would of write place value is an easy way to work out hard equations like 190 + 701. Also In your last sentence I would add a full stop after value. But other then that you say the sentences perfectly clear which makes it easy to understand what you're saying.
Other than the mistakes in the first paragraph this D.L.O is very good and easy to understand. When some people use screencastify they either mumble or get very shy and talk very. Your screencastify was nice and clear.